Major Project rough storyboard idea

A rough idea of what I think the animation could look like, bar any design decisions, as I am trying to work out what I will need to design. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated!

Fantastic Voyage: Attack of the Hookworm Final Storyboard

I have finished drawing the storyboard and also corrected a small mistake in the fourth panel where it said 8 cm but the hookworm is actually approximately 8 mm.

I will add the narrators text after I have recorded it, which I will hopefully achieve this afternoon!

I might also go back in and change the foot as it doesn't look quite like a foot yet...

But all in all I feel almost ready for the Animatic! 

FV: My Story Board so far

I'm trying to put as much detail in as is necessary while keeping it simple enough to understand! Also I'm working on refining my story telling technique as I thought that the FSTS Storyboard needed a lot of improvement. Again, no narrators voice yet, I will add that when I've casted my speaker!

First Page of my Story Board! Fantastic Voyage

Please give feedback on style! I have not added the narrators explanations yet, I just wanted to know how the pictures read without it.

Fantastic Voyage: Story Board First Draft

 

Apologies, it's very sketchy but this is a rough estimation on what my story board will look like! The writing underneath the panels is the narrators voice and the notes are things that are happening.

Coloured Storyboard FSTS

My coloured story board!

Very rough storyboard FSTS

This is my rough storyboard, I will start refining it in a mo!

Animatic exercise with my story board

Today in Simon's lesson we learnt how to manipulate images, or even better, Photoshop files to create an animatic. I will start my final animatic next week when I have finalized my story and story board, I also have to remember to create key features on different layers in Photoshop so it will be easier to manipulate them in premier.

FSTS Story Board

This is my story board so far (it's the whole story :p) Concept art will be posted in a moment! (Did I miss anything obvious?)